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Re: Letters To The Unreadable
:thud: Wow! I'm agreeing with Livia. That was AMAZING!! You really put your emotions in there. The short sentences were so simple, and yet you were able to put so ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Blood Tears (Chapter 1)
Hello GothicButterfly. Nice job with the story. There are a few things though that need to be fixed... The warm breeze whipped across my pale face, blowing my blond and ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Fainting at the Sight of Blood
Well, with over all fainting, it's normally because they are traumatized, in shock, exhausted, or your nervous system and circulation cause a drop in the amount of blood pumped to ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Rain
.... WOW!! Nice job! You really made the story flow. Awesome work. A couple minor details though... A steady rhythm of splish.slide.plip. I understand that the periods are like pauses, ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Mount Olympus Section 1 Chapter 2
Okey-dokey, I guess I'll be one to review this. I'm Lucy. Your story is coming along really well. I'll start out by talking about some of your characters. Hera Okay, ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Well, after quite a while of sheer hecticness and lots of... other things.... I am back, for however long that will be. :D
Dec 31, 2009